- 'Latest News' section would benefit from more content. I think you should ask the audience to directly get involved with the band's global warming protest interests, make up details of a protest the audience can be invited to join and include a shot of the girls with a placard ready to protest.
- At the end of the 'Behind the scenes' include a plug for the new videos - this can just be stills, text and sound from the song overlaid but this provides more convergence.
Monday, 4 November 2019
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