- 'Latest News' section would benefit from more content. I think you should ask the audience to directly get involved with the band's global warming protest interests, make up details of a protest the audience can be invited to join and include a shot of the girls with a placard ready to protest.
- At the end of the 'Behind the scenes' include a plug for the new videos - this can just be stills, text and sound from the song overlaid but this provides more convergence.
Monday, 4 November 2019
First draft post featuring your website (feedback)
Feedback for first draft:
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
-
The lip sync is out in 0:32, 0:40, 1:06, so I may shorten shots before the lip syncing or redo the lipsyncing in general. I can't use ...
-
I want them to be a close up with the band as it's just a duo, add in a guitar as theirs a guitar playing in it. I'll take photos of...
-
My audience member VAL would be experiencers, makers and Believers. They fit very well with my audience type as experiencers are young whi...
No comments:
Post a Comment